Seduced by the ethereal night,
The day takes a plunge into her
Unfathomable depths, drinks in
Her beauty and resurfaces to
Experience the ecstasy of going
Back into the depths, again and again…
Frankly, it gave me visions of copulation. Again, again... But this visual is more so in the cities. In the mountains or in villages, it is a different feeling.
Anil Kurup: Though I didn't think of it while writing, once I finished it I thought about the possibilities of interpretation. Thank you.
Venu Chettan: Is that analogy got something to do with sexual union? I guess so, correct me if I'm wrong.
Balan Sir: I felt that whether it was a bit forced once I finished writing it. Actually what happened was I woke up from a siesta with these lines in mind. I am getting world-weary and will move to the mountains with my serpent and eagle soon :)
NB: Dear Sirs, I just wonder how mischievous you are. At least you should have kept the fact in mind that the piece was penned by a Brahmachari :D :D :D
No, Arun, I did not mean that. I meant that the words and the lines have a rolling motion. Somehow the picture of a spin bowler tossing the ball up and the ball, upon pitching, spinning and bouncing came to my mind. :-)
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arun, the essence can be interpreted and related relatively and diversely. this is my opinion.
Quite some impact.
beautiful rolling movement, again and again, spinning and bouncing after pitching, if you know what i mean, like e.a.s. prasanna.
Frankly, it gave me visions of copulation. Again, again... But this visual is more so in the cities. In the mountains or in villages, it is a different feeling.
Arun, I left my comments with what I felt was a subtle reply.
Balan said it as it should be
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Anil Kurup: Though I didn't think of it while writing, once I finished it I thought about the possibilities of interpretation. Thank you.
Venu Chettan: Is that analogy got something to do with sexual union? I guess so, correct me if I'm wrong.
Balan Sir: I felt that whether it was a bit forced once I finished writing it. Actually what happened was I woke up from a siesta with these lines in mind. I am getting world-weary and will move to the mountains with my serpent and eagle soon :)
NB: Dear Sirs, I just wonder how mischievous you are. At least you should have kept the fact in mind that the piece was penned by a Brahmachari :D :D :D
No, Arun, I did not mean that. I meant that the words and the lines have a rolling motion. Somehow the picture of a spin bowler tossing the ball up and the ball, upon pitching, spinning and bouncing came to my mind. :-)
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