On the second floor balcony
I stood, holding the railing and
Wondering at what I saw
Beneath, a portion of the ground
Neatly paved with cement bricks.
‘Strange’, I judged, or else why
That area no one treads got paved?
But then, in the next moment
I realized that it was not a pavement
But a wall collapsed in last night’s rain!
8 comments:
I see that you have quite a different , unique way of seeing things and bring out things differently. I admire it.
a view from a different angle...a new perspective? excellent.
Anil Kurup, Venu Chettan: The piece, I feel, is a byproduct of slow wit :) Otherwise I would’ve got it from the first place that it was a collapsed wall. I’ve never seen a wall collapsed so neatly, it was shaped like bow!
Hmm... One too many the previous night? ;-)
Balan sir: Noooooooooo...
i totally agree to Anilkurup. u have this amazing sense of sniffing things in ur own way :) sniffing being a highly complimentary word :P
"sniffing being a highly complimentary word :P", good that you said it, otherwise I would've got offended :P:D. And yeah, thanks for the compliment :)
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